User:Ixgurung

Bio

About me:

Hi, I'm Ixgurung a international student in United State. I currently studying in a Community college and taking a nursing major. My dream is to become a registered nurse [A registered nurse (RN) is a licensed medical professional who provides hands-on care in different medical and community settings. ] . Aside from becoming a nurse, I also have interest on arts and drawing. In my opinion, drawing or arts is an excellent way of documenting our observations, thoughts, experience and inspiration. Another thing to get to know me is that I'm a quite and pretty introverted person. I like to have most of the time to myself. But i like to have a pet as a companion. I want to have husky dog or a golden retriever dog. Dogs have been the good companionship for the humans. They give unconditional love. It is also said that, introducing a dog in your life brings you benefits far beyond basic companionship.

My interest related to Wikipedia:

As a nursing student who also like arts, I might take some interest on the Wikipedia. In Wikipedia, I can explore articles related to medical illustration, which combines art and medicine. So as a volunteer, I will like to accomplish to publish articles about the nursing field related to the arts. Also from Wikipedia I can gain many information and knowledge. I can read the articles related to my field and do some research from Wikipedia. In addition, I would like to translate or can write some articles in my nation language. I have seen that articles are not translated to my nation language more. Another reason for using Wikipedia is to share my knowledge, especially in the fields of medicine and possibly even the arts. Using this cooperative platform, I hope to learn from and interact with others while sharing factual information."

Article evaluation

I have chosen the brush pen article to evaluate because I like the way the tip of the brush is flexible and writes smoothly. Actually, i watch some traditional or like a historical drama( korean drama, japanese drama, chinese drama ). In this historical dramas, i have seen them using a brush pen to write and do arts. So, i got some knowledge about the brush pen, which get me to evaluate this article. I visited the [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fudepen] page on Wikipedia, and found these aspects of it worth commenting on: it's lack of citation, it's lack of information or some left out information, and is the article up to date or not.

Citations

This article is short but it does provide some reference and some source of reliable information on specific brush pens and reviews. However, the article contains disclaimer saying that the listed sources may not be reliable. Also there is not much citation on this article. But the writer has clearly said that we readers can edit the article if there are any mistakes or any missing sources. From my point of view, this article is pretty good to start to edit if anyone is a beginner like me in the Wikipedia.

Missing information

Even if the article is short but well written, most of the information is not included. In this article only the eastern brush pen (Kuretake, Pentel, Shin Han, Akashiya, Sakura and Tombow are all well known Eastern brush pen manufacturers) is talked about. From my research, there are western brush pens too. Winsor and Newton and Faber Castell are examples of Western brush manufacturers. In addition there are more to be known about the brush pen. The writer has not written how the brush pen is, the difference of the shades, how many type of brush pens are there, sizes and more other information.

Article up to date information

As I see it, this article was written in the year 2022. On the top of the article there is a template where a date is written (October, 2022) so I estimated the time. From my perspective this article is well written and the duration of this article is not vase. It's like a year and a half.

Conclusion

From this article, i get to know about the brush pen and get to where the brush pen was first made. Also get to know more about the brush pen. This article is good and easy to read and evaluate. There might be some sort of information and the writer is himself/herself not sure about the information and resources but overall this article is well written. Addition to that we readers can add some information on this article as the writer has said in his/her template message "Please help improve this article by looking for better, more reliable sources. Unreliable citations may be challenged and removed. "

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