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Week 3: Adding content

Link to article: Kyoto

Strengths:

- Information on demographics, population, and geography are accurate with reliable references

- Most sources used for references in the article are relevant and reliable

Weaknesses:

- Some information in article are missing a citation

- There is some bias perspective when portraying controversial information

I want to edit out some of the bias perspective in WWII information about the atomic bomb. Also, I will add information about Onin War and Kinmon incident with corresponding citations. Then, I will add some citations to information that are missing citations like cycling.