User:Ms.Fixer

Articles for Improvement

Nike sweatshops:

• Lead section fails to accurately summarize content points
• Citations are needed for verification of content validity
• Organization of content could be more effective
• Subheadings or bullets could be incorporated under content sections

Civil ceremony:

• Lead section should be revised to reflect content
• New sections could be created from lead section information
• Citations are needed for verification of content validity
• Not enough references are included

Problems and Tasks for Assigned Articles

Charro Days:

Problems

• The article's writing and formatting style does not follow the Wiki style guidelines
• It is missing a lead section
• Existing content should be organized into different sections to improve clarity
• Headings and subheadings should be added
• Additional citations are needed
• Visual representation could be improved through the addition of images

Tasks

• Sort through the ideas presented in the existing content
  • Determine if any points are being made and which can be separated into subsections
• Construct a lead section from the existing content
  • Ensure that it briefly, but accurately summarizes the article's points
• Incorporate Wikipedia's summary style into the article to improve organization
• Include headings for clarification and better article structure
  • Ensure it accurately introduces information and subtopics
• Adjust tone where needed
• If possible, locate more references about the topic and add them
• Add citations where missing
  • If can't be provided then unreliable information should be deleted
• If possible, locate images that can illustrate the information presented in the article

Christopher Wilder:

Problems

• Lead section could be longer
• Grammatical errors are present
• Headings should be formatted the same
• Subsections could be added from existent content
• Information should be organized and placed with better corresponding section

Tasks

• Verify talk page and sources (Completed)
  • Some of the advice/information discussed requires extensive research of references (Completed)
• The lead section briefly addresses the topic and only some parts of the content (Not necessary after all)
  • Move information around so that it reflects points to be presented
• Reformat sections for clarification
  • Look at the possibility of separating the murders by state and giving each a subheading instead - makes it easier to identify information
• Fix headings so that they all match
  • Name of victim, states of murder, or both
• Fix minor grammatical errots
• Create "In Popular Culture" section (Completed)