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Evaluation on Lillias Hamilton Everything in the article was relevant to the article topic. Nothing was really distracting. The article was also very neutral because it just told facts. There was no heavy bias toward a particular position. There were no viewpoints that were overrepresented or underrepresented. There was only one link, and it did work. Each fact was referenced with an appropriate, reliable reference, which were all neutral. The article is very brief about Lillias Hamilton, but it does not seem like there were things that were necessarily missing. This is not apart of any wikiprojects. The way Wikipedia discusses this topic is different from the way we’ve talked about it in class because Wikipedia just presents facts. It does not present any interpretation or connection between other aspects of the topic.

Magistra Hersend I am going to try to expand her work with King Louis IX. I also would like to find out how she was privileged to work for the king as a woman surgeon and how she got into medicine.

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Magistra Hersend was an important woman in the life King Louis IX. She was the medical attendant to King Louis IX and attended the queen, Marguerite: Isabel (Elizabeth) queen of Portugal. Her most important role was that she accompanied King Louis IX on the seventh crusade. Because of her work and loyalty to the king and queen, King Louis IX granted her a life pension of twelve pence a day.^[1] Later on, Magistra Hersend eventually married the royal apothecary. She also was one of the women who attended the royal couple and female camp followers.^[2]

References

^ Janus (in German). E.J. Brill. 1908.
^ Sandra L. Chaff; Ruth Haimbach; Carol Fenichel; Nina B. Woodside (1977). Women in medicine: A bibliography of the literature on women physicians. Drexel University College of Medicine Legacy Center. The Scarecrow Press, Inc.: Metuchen, NJ and London.

[1] Janus (in German). E.J. Brill. 1908.

[2] Sandra L. Chaff; Ruth Haimbach; Carol Fenichel; Nina B. Woodside (1977). Women in medicine: A bibliography of the literature on women physicians. Drexel University College of Medicine Legacy Center. The Scarecrow Press, Inc.: Metuchen, NJ and London.

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