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Activity (Tutorial 6)

Source from WTC7 Featured Article: https://www.nist.gov/pba/questions-and-answers-about-nist-wtc-7-investigation

Scholarship: The article is from the NIST's investigation of WTC7 collapse or National Institute of Science and Technology, and would be authored by someone with high technical knowledge and expertise on the subject of engineering and structures

Author: The name of the author is not very clear as it is an archived article and its a Q & A and maybe represents the response of the overall organization as opposed to an individuals.

Independent Verifiability: The source, stems a lot from the post 9/11 investigation and it's subsequent conclusions therefore if you are to verify it independently it is possible.

Context:

The article can be considered relatively recent in terms of how far it was from the event as well as how far from the present. With 9/11 being such a recent event in terms of world's history and the massive trove of information and ongoing questions that are being answered such as how things happened and why things happened, this article is very relevant.

Intent: The article was intended for mainly the public with low technical knowledge, in order to dispel myths and give light to why the collapse occured.

Assignment 1

1. an annotation for each of the five sources stating how each will contribute to your article (what sections will you use it in, for example)

You should be absolutely sure that the information you are going to use meets the Wikipedia conditions of verifiability, that your chosen topic is notable (does Wikipedia need an article on this topic).

Article Title: Zipline International

Article working URL:

Associated Wiki Project: /Business and economics/Companies/T-Z

Proposed titles and description of sections:

-Future

Sources:

MIT Technology Review: Zipline’s Ambitious Medical Drone Delivery in Africa

Article from MIT technology review investigating explaining some of the basic history of the startup, how and where it operates and some basic technical info concerning how the drones operate such as launching and landing.

Also investigates the impact on Rwanda

Techcrunch: Zipline raises $25 million to deliver medical supplies by drone

This article marks a major source of capital for Zipline and will contribute to the history section of the article

MIT Technology Review: Zipline Launches World's Fastest Commercial Delivery Drone

Looks at Zipline's latest drone which is claimed to be the fastest commercial delivery drone in the world. This will contribute to parts of the History and Operations subsections of the article as it gives details for how its drone operates and also marks a major milestone in the company's history.

Harvard Business Review: When Technology Gets Ahead of Society

This article from HBR, explains much of the economic justification for the operation of Zipline and its impact potential. Important information is given in regards to how medical supplies such as blood must be stored and the challenges that comes with trying to deliver it. Also useful is it describes the role of UPS in helping to shape Zipline's logistics capabilities.

Wired: THE WORLD’S FASTEST DRONES WANT TO SAVE LIVES IN AMERICA, TOO

Examine's the prospect of Ziplie's plans to expand into America, the challenges it has to deal with and this will help significantly in adding content to the Future section of the article.

Activity 1 (Tutorial 5)

Article with added source: Bodies in the space environment

Activity 1 Quality and Importance Ratings in WikiProjects

Random Article: Michael Guglielmucci

Rating: Starter

Steps required for an A Class Rating

1. Needs citations for certain paragraphs
2. Needs concise headings and sub headings
3. Needs an info box/photo listing age, dob etc like all biography pages.
4. Additional basic information needed like exact date of birth

Article: Garrett Miller (politician)

This article has been tagged with a {{BLP unsourced}} tag as sections of the biography are uncited.

Talk section has also been added for further discussion

Activity 1 Tutorial 4 (Featured Articles)

Characteristics of a featured article: Raccoon

1. This article is well written and comprehensive.The article exhibits good succinct prose and is written in an easily readable manner.
2. The article is well cited, with every major fact and statement substantiated by comphrehensive third party sources such as books and scholarly articles.
3. The article's subject is fairly factual and neutral in nature and apolitical and the article reflects this by presenting a completely comprehensive factual summary of the subject. areas where opinion and bias might come into play, such as the Interaction with Humans, and mythology section are correctly formatted into subheadings and summarised and backed up by references.
4. Racoons are not a highly controversial topic nor is it an ongoing current event and a well established animal therefore racoons are not the subject of edit wars and ongoing debate making Racoons highly stable.
5. Content under every subheading contains substantial information backed up by referencing and isn't merely one sentence.
6. The article begins with a clear lead which summarises the information that is outlined, beginning with a basic description and briefly mentioning their diet, habitat and behaviour that gives the reader an overview of what they can expect to find. The content is split into distinct categories of: etymology, taxonomy, description, behaviour, range, health, racoons and humans etc which are split into sub-headings that can be easily navigated to. Each paragraph has multiple citations, with most sentences ending in at least one citation, showing that the article is well-researched, and all information can be tracked to another source. Each section has relevant pictures or diagrams to demonstrate the traits discussed and, where appropriate, tables are used to summarise information and present it in a way that is easy to comprehend (such as in subspecies where each one is described in terms of image, trinomial authority, description, range and synonyms).

Zipline International

Zipline International Inc is a startup founded in 2011 by Keeller Rinaudo specialising in...

Zipline

Founded	2011
Founder	...

History

2011

2015

2018

Operations

Drones

Zipline uses an in house developed automated fixed wing drone

Future

Zipline has plans to expand in Tanzania and America

References

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External Links

Official website