User:Royce, like Rolls/sandbox

Submission declined on 29 February 2024 by Robert McClenon (talk).

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Declined by Robert McClenon 3 months ago. Last edited by Royce, like Rolls 3 months ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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Comment: Please do not submit multiple copies of drafts. It does not increase the likelihood that one of them will be accepted into article space, and annoys the reviewers. It is likely to be seen as an effort to game the system, and may result in the drafts being nominated for deletion. Robert McClenon (talk) 05:36, 29 February 2024 (UTC)

Comment: This draft is a partial duplicate of Draft:Ralph J. Nagel. —TechnoSquirrel69 (sigh) 23:44, 28 February 2024 (UTC)

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