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This article introduces "Chunian". There is only a few information about the economy of this city. Therefore, more economic information is required with verified reference, such as the information of different industries in this city, main production. Meanwhile, the culture of this city should be introduced, so that readers can know more about this city.
The article is focus on its scope, and the writing is understandable. However, there is only one section, which does not achieve the criteria of good article. It could be improved by adding some related sections. In addition, the article is lack of references such as the date of the U.S admitting Idaho as a state. Furthermore, content of the article is simple, as it only refers the history of Idaho. Such as demography and geography of Idaho can be involved.
This article is a featured article. It is well-written and achieve all criteria of good article. There is no grammar nor spelling errors and it is concentrate on its topic. It introduces the early life, football career, death, legacy, style of play. career statistics and honours of Duncan Edwards. It has a clear layout and is understandable. It has neutral fairly viewpoint.