User:Snap Boogies

Bio

Welcome to my user page! my name is Clayton and I live in the northwest.

I'm 19 and currently going to collage for an associates degree in criminal justice.

I work in construction as a machine operator. I generally move freight around to help others.

An accomplishments I made was completing an internship at the Lake Steven's Police Department.

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Some of my interests are Law Enforcement, Snowmobiling, Outer Space and Jet skiing.

I go snowmobiling ever year around winter up in the pass. Law Enforcement has always been an interest

to me because my dad's twin sister is a police officer and she always tells cool story's. Outer space is

the one thing in this world that we know vary little about and it just fascinates me. My favorite thing about outer space

is black holes. My last interest is jet skiing simply because I love anything and everything to do with water.

I sometimes wonder if why I like water so much is because its kind of resembles space in a way like floating and not being able

to breath while in it or under it in this case.

Article review

I've been interested in space my whole life. I would say I know more then the average person about space and black holes. So I like to read about random things that are in space and I came across UY Scuti on Wikipedia. It is the largest

star we have found to date. Just to put a picture in your mind it is 100,000 times brighter and over 1,000 times bigger than our Sun. I found three things I would like to comment on: The user friendliness, The lack of the link to the

List of largest stars and lack of a name to the people or person that studied/found the star.

User Friendliness

UY Scuti Wikipedia page looks awful when you don't understand all the acronym's like K, R_☉, AU, etc. It also doesn't help when there are numbers spread everywhere throughout the article. It would be nice if it could be cleaned up a little bit

or maybe have a separate section for all the mathematical stuff for the 1 in a million that can understand it. If that was to be done, the visitor wouldn't feel so lost while shifting through the main part of the article.

Link to the List of largest stars

It would be nice if they added a link to the Wikipedia page List of largest stars. This could help visitors see what kind of other vary large stars are out there and maybe help them research further in to what they are looking for. Also it is number one on this page it should recognize that.

Fonder's name?

It would be nice if they put the German astronomers who first cataloged UY Scuti. So we could further look into their credibility and/or history of what they have studied or found other than UY Scuti. They say the Bonn Observatory is where they

found it but not by who.

Summary

Over all this page is great. It tells you everything yo need to know about this star and some. To the average person the page may look a little confusing and could maybe make a new section for all the numbers and acronym's to help others understand

more. The page should also have a link to the Wikipedia page List of largest stars to help visitors see what kind of other vary large stars are out there. The founder's should also be listed instead of saying "German astronomers" so we can see

their credibility and anything else they may have found.