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Article Critique
[edit]The wikipedia article "Ernst Eduard Taubert" has an academic purpose of bringing awareness to Ernst Eduard Taubert. The biggest problem I see here with this article is the lack of information. It appears to be somewhat incomplete. To fill in the gaps I would recommend adding more information on his educational background, his musical career (maybe even naming some pieces that he has worked on), events and or timeline of his personal life, and more informational on his actual career (i.e what genre of music he worked on). The methods and format used to convey this information is not ideal for wikipedia; I would recommend cleaning up the presentation of this page to make it easier to navigate in order for readers to extract information from this article. I would also recommend referencing more outside sources especially since there are new facts that had to come from somewhere in almost every other sentence. The one source that is cited in this article does seem to come from a reliable source, so that is one good thing I would not change. Another way to strengthen this article would be to add images and/or videos. I would recommend an actual photo of Ernst Eduard Taubert and maybe even a video of him performing. One thing I will compliment this article on doing is refraining from bias statements; all information is completely factual. All in all, this article has lot of work to do in order to expand and strengthen this page.