Not done Expand the leading paragraph to adequately summarize the article. Ensure that one would be able to summarize Roblox in a few words after reading only the lead.
Not done Mention the development cycle
Partly done Mention the developers
Not done Mention the business model
Partly done Improve the Reception and revenue subsection.
Done Mention the reception of Roblox as a whole.
Partly done Quote some reviews if possible.
Done Remove the comparison of the concurrent players of Adopt Me! to the concurrent players of Mount & Blade II: Bannerlord and simply state the number of concurrent players.
Partly done Improve the Development subsection by merging the extremely short paragraphs together
Not done Develop a substantial subsection describing the community of Roblox with reliable secondary sources.
Not done Find and add images - preferably screenshots - showing the reader what Roblox looks like.
Not done Mention the crowdfunding of Roblox game developers using reliable sources.
