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Hi Yuxiang, and welcome to Wikipedia. Thanks for helping. I have actually reverted your changes on the Lao She article. A few things

 * You introduced a link to your own Yuxiang4 space into the body of the article
 * The content changes didn't really add new information. The English version of the book title is deconventionalized, and the sentence construction was a bit awkward.

I'm glad that you went for a small-scale, focused edit as your first contribution. Please don't be discouraged, but maybe have another go through Help:Getting started and think about what key information might be missing for a reader before the next edit. Eg I notice it doesn't say when Lao She got married.

I also used IP, 174.3.241.63, to edit Wiki.

Conflatuman (talk) 07:52, 27 November 2020 (UTC)

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