User talk:1985ap
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Peer Review[edit]
The contributions you have left on the Economy of the Palestinian territories are a great add to the page. The page didn’t have any information on population growth nor population distribution. These two topics also are very important to know since we have been learning about how population growth, demographic transition, and population pyramids recently in class and the major impacts that these topics have on economic developing countries. It seems like it is a little difficult for the country of Palestine to try to get better official numbers on their population, since many Palestinians keep migrating out of the country because of many conflicts with Israel. Good job! 1992MC (talk) 01:19, 2 December 2014 (UTC)
Peer Review[edit]
I like what you added to Economy of the Palestinian territories. The information is all relevant and gives greater insight into economic factors within the Palestinian territories. Population growth was great to add because it reflects many economic factors. Good Job. 1993vl (talk) 19:15, 7 December 2014 (UTC)
December 2014[edit]
Your addition to Economy of the Palestinian territories has been removed, as it appears to have added copyrighted material to Wikipedia without permission from the copyright holder. If you are the copyright holder, please read Wikipedia:Donating copyrighted materials for more information on uploading your material to Wikipedia. For legal reasons, Wikipedia cannot accept copyrighted text, or images borrowed from other websites, or printed material without a verifiable license; such additions will be deleted. You may use external websites or publications as a source of information, but not as a source of content, such as sentences or images—you must write using your own words. Wikipedia takes copyright violations very seriously and persistent violators will be blocked from editing. Dl2000 (talk) 16:58, 7 December 2014 (UTC)
Hi 1985ap, it was great reading your article on Economy of Palestenian Territores and the contributions you've made to it. The article was lacking information about Gaza and the West Bank, thank you for viging an overview on it! It was great that you also updated the information on pulation growth and population distribution, this will highly help future readers to get a better idea about the Economy of Palestinian territories. You did a great job, thanks! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mariaccerro (talk • contribs) 03:42, 8 December 2014 (UTC)