Please remember to sign your name on talk pages by clicking or or by typing four tildes (~~~~); this will automatically produce your username and the date. Also, please do your best to always fill in the edit summary field. Below are some useful links to facilitate your involvement. Happy editing! ˜danjel [ talk | contribs ] 12:43, 29 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
G'day 1Macbeth1. I've removed the two paragraphs that you inserted into the article. The first paragraph was rather mundane as the vast majority of schools in Australia receive governmnent funding supplemented by fees. The second had an element of personal opinion (that the bars made the school look "morbid").
If you know something of the school, I could point out a couple of things about the article that could be improved (if you're keen)? Also, if you're interested in schools on wikipedia, then consider joining WP:EIA or WP:WPSCH? If you need any help, please get in touch via my talkpage. ˜danjel [ talk | contribs ] 12:53, 29 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
In regards to your latest edits, neutrality is very important, which means that we can't allow statements which seem to be based in opinion more than actual fact (if you had news articles or other reliable sources, which support your text then find them and {{ref}} them. Same goes for whether or not there are gay/lesbian students at the school; I imagine there are, but... ˜danjel [ talk | contribs ] 13:01, 29 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
