User talk:2502renegate2502

May 2021[edit]

Hello, I'm CommanderWaterford. I noticed that in this edit to Hannah Yeoh, you removed content without adequately explaining why. In the future, it would be helpful to others if you described your changes to Wikipedia with an edit summary. If this was a mistake, don't worry, the removed content has been restored. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you. CommanderWaterford (talk) 17:16, 5 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Jaslyn Go Hui Leng (July 15)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Theroadislong was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

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Theroadislong (talk) 18:54, 15 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, 2502renegate2502! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Theroadislong (talk) 18:54, 15 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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Happy editing! Justanothersgwikieditor (talk) 07:29, 28 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

K. Shanmugam[edit]

Hi there, I saw the ping at the Teahouse and decided to start the conversation here first.

First edit

First 2 paragraphs are unsourced but listing (The Asia Pacific Legal 500, 2001 - 2007) and (Who's Who Legal, Singapore 2008) are a bit insufficient. You need to provide a proper reference, whether its offline or online.
American diplomat and academic Kurt Campbell, former Assistant Secretary of State for East Asian and Pacifc... is a direct lift from article.
Typically we are wary of blogs and the blog you used will be considered a copyright violations.

Subsequent edits

You added back the same text so same issue above.
While He also represented Singapore in the Philip C Jessup International Law Moot in 1984, where his team won Runner Up in the International Division is correctly sourced, the rest are unsourced.
Reference is put at the wrong place, top of page instead of end of the line that the reference is supporting.
I reverted the whole chunk of changes as the quality of the overall change is poor.

Do take note that for biography of living person, most statements need to be properly sourced per Wikipedia's policy. I am sorry for reverting your first edits but I will advise getting familiar with Wikipedia by editing other articles that are not so high profile first. Thanks --Justanothersgwikieditor (talk) 02:54, 29 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Ok what was wrong with the "Awards" section? 2502renegate2502 (talk) 14:14, 30 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Does every sentence in each paragraph have to be cited? Can I just cite the paragraph as a whole? 2502renegate2502 (talk) 14:19, 30 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

2502renegate2502, preferably every sentence is cited for biography of a living person. A reference at the end of 2-3 sentences is fine as long the reference supports that 2-3 sentences.

You provided a direct source for Philip C Jessup International Law Moot in 1984 which is good, the first paragraph is unsourced. If that is covered by the same reference, do place the same reference for the first paragraph as well. This is because once you broke off to another paragraph, we will not assume that the latter reference covers the previous paragraph. Justanothersgwikieditor (talk) 03:33, 2 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I seen your latest edits and generally looks good. I did not delve into details but sources look okay at a glance. Justanothersgwikieditor (talk) 06:14, 2 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Ok thanks for the feedback 2502renegate2502 (talk) 14:58, 2 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:Jaslyn Go Hui Leng[edit]

Hello, 2502renegate2502. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Jaslyn Go Hui Leng, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 19:03, 15 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Jaslyn Go Hui Leng[edit]

Hello, 2502renegate2502. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Jaslyn Go Hui Leng".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz ^{Read! Talk!} 19:10, 15 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Potentially non neutral edits[edit]

Hi. I noticed that many of your edits focus on K. Shanmugam. Some of them, such as this one removing some criticism about him, appear less than neutral. As such, I would like to have if you have a conflict of interest with him. Specifically, do you have any personal or professional relationship with the subject? If you are being paid for your edits, either directly or indirectly, you must disclose this relationship. Thanks. Darylgolden^(talk) Ping when replying 04:35, 8 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Notice of Conflict of interest noticeboard discussion[edit]

There is currently a discussion at Wikipedia:Conflict of interest/Noticeboard regarding a possible conflict of interest incident with which you may be involved. Thank you. Darylgolden^(talk) Ping when replying 08:55, 17 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]