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Kenzie on Abby's Article Lesbian Feminism

This article is amazing, very informative. I'm surprised by how many external sources there are. I did not find any grammatical errors or issues in general, and I couldn't tell where you added. It was very professional.

One suggestion I would have is to meet with Aimme Harrison about adding more book sources. It is good to have an article that is well put together with sources from more than just the web.

Your introductory sentence was very factual. At each claim or fact, there was a citation. I really do not see any problems, good work!