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SO100: Instructor Feedback
[edit]Good start on this assignment. Some feedback to help you as you progress:
- Your sources are all online and not academic or peer-reviewed. The best ones are cancer.gov, but even government websites are not always unbiased, so it is important that you visit the ECC library website and find academic sources for this. Newspaper articles would also work.
- Good start on the writing. Make sure you are adding new information -- so the first sentence in your draft right now would be something that's already in the article, so you would need to add all new content.
- Also, just make sure everything you are writing is in your own words and that you cite each source appropriately. In this draft, it is hard to tell which information comes from which source. So, make sure you are clear about that.