User talk:Abbyadams55
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[edit]Let me know when you're ready for me to review this....auntieruth (talk) 20:14, 14 December 2015 (UTC)
- I've had a look at this, and it really needs more work.
- additional citations beyond the encyclopedia --try JSTOR and the DIGITAL TIMES in the library's data base
- expanded text. What exactly did they hope to do? Why did they hope to do it? What was wrong with the plan, other than it was uninformed, according to Moreau?
- If you've been sick, I need documentation, and I can extend past the 23rd, otherwise, I have to grade it as is. auntieruth (talk) 18:20, 21 December 2015 (UTC)