User talk:Abihello6/Seattle Underground

Preliminary Review from Kaylea

Hi, I'm starting to walk through articles and give everyone informal early feedback on how they're doing. You'll notice this is a little bit form-letter-ish but I hope it is still helpful.

I see you've made some changes and are starting to incorporate elements from our training, but there's still a ways to go with this article. If you're feeling stuck, please let me know how I can support you.

I particularly appreciate your usage of good quality sources in this revision!

One thing I'm not clear about is how this work connects with the article as a whole -- are you planning to edit just this section and paste it into the current live article?

Kaylea Champion (talk) 21:44, 27 January 2022 (UTC)

Peer Review

Hi! I completed a peer review, nice job gathering the information and condensing it into a digestible paragraph. The article does need more content though. Good luck! --Njpierce16 (talk) 01:54, 30 January 2022 (UTC)

feedback on progress

Hi @Abihello6:

This looks okay, and with a few tweaks it will be okay to go live. That said, this article looks like it needs more work before it would receive full credit for this assignment, but you have approval to move it to live if you are ready. If you want to, you can move it to live and then continue to work. The goal is to advance the article by a quality class in ways that demonstrate engagement with the norms of Wikipedia.

Before you go live, you might want to mix this bit from the old article above your section, into your new section: "Only a small portion of the Seattle Underground has been restored and made safe and accessible to the public on guided tours. In 1965, local citizen Bill Speidel established "Bill Speidel's Underground Tour", which operates to this day."

There is a risk of the section sounding more like a travel guide than an encyclopedia article :/ so I would remove the ticket pricing bit.

As a reminder, here are our go-live steps:

1. Final read-through draft.
2. Check live article for changes. [History Tab]
3. Two browsers side by side, if you can. Source editing mode ("Code mode"), not visual editor.
4. Paragraph by paragraph copy, leaving behind an explanatory edit summary after each chunk of changes.
5. Note on article talk page.
6. Note at the top of your sandbox version.
7. Submit a link to your article on Canvas.
8. Celebrate!

Kaylea Champion (talk) 23:31, 12 February 2022 (UTC)