User talk:Academiax
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:46, 23 February 2022 (UTC)
Medina's Peer Review[edit]
The content that is added is relevant to the topic and is very important. I would suggest adding 1-2 specific instances in addition to the story about American troops being killed. Maybe you can give us more examples of what these warlords have done. In addition, you can add a lot of information about how these warlords are involved in political and economic activity. How do they contribute to the economy if they do? How do they earn their revenue? I recognize that you still have a lot more to add, but hopefully you can make use of this feedback when you are adding more content to your article. Overall, I think the information you added is great. You just need to add more information. Some sections you can include in your article include the economic and political activity of these warlords, how these warlords were formed, who supports them, and what their goals are. It would also be great if you could add images, but maybe nothing traumatic or triggering.