User talk:Aeastvol

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Hello, Aeastvol, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 13:47, 29 August 2019 (UTC)

Notes

Hi, I wanted to give you some notes on your work.

I saw that you wanted to create a new section for Benny Johnson, however it looks like this content is already covered in the article in the controversies section, in the plagiarism subsection. Unless there is an extraordinary amount of coverage for this one specific person's plagiarism then this is something that should only be mentioned in passing in the overall subsection about plagiarism. I have to be honest in that I don't think that this really warrants its own subsection in the main Buzzfeed article.

Now when it comes to the awards, this is a better section to work on, however keep in mind that we typically don't need to list all of the individual awards won by the employees. I'd go for a general overview of the awards received and only go into specifics for the most major awards, such as the Pulitzer nomination.

I would recommend working on the funding section, since that needs updating and editing for flow/style. It can be re-written in prose/paragraph format, which would be better. The community section needs to be updated as well. It's not marked, but the acquisition section looks like it probably needs updating.

I hope this all helps! Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:15, 23 September 2019 (UTC)