User talk:Alabaw25

This user is a student editor in University_at_Albany/Information_Literacy_in_the_Humanities_and_Arts_(Fall_2021) .

Welcome![edit]

Hello, Alabaw25, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 22:01, 2 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

You have an overdue training assignment.[edit]

Please complete the assigned training modules. --TrudiJ (talk) 12:47, 27 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

WCI Peer Review[edit]

You did well introducing the founder of the theory of agent causation. You add a date, creating a timeline in which this happened. You can further expand on the compatibilist and incompatibilist views on this theory, with more details. You can dates for this, and a create more of a timeline. I think the most important thing to do here is to expand on the different views on this theory, include if there are anymore other than these 2, and what they entail. You have a lead section that is generally easy to understand with a clear structure. The information given both seems balanced and neutral, just more information could help you out. Jjminhas (talk) 14:19, 28 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

WCI Peer Review 2[edit]

You did a good job of clearly stating the meaning of agent causation, hitting the lead point. However, I think that you could have expanded on some of the theories. I like how you put down a couple names of people who have defended the theory, making there be two sides of an argument.

Response to Peer Review[edit]

Hello,

Thank you so much for peer-reviewing my article. It was a big help. I am in the process of editing the article in response to your suggestions now. For more detailed feedback of my response to your peer review, see https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Printy13/Denotation/Alabaw25_Peer_Review. Thanks again! Printy13 (talk) 14:18, 1 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]