User talk:AlixElizabeth/sandbox
What does the article (or section) do well? The subtitles are clear to see each aspect of Villennes-Sur-Seine. The subtitles under the history section follow the timeline.
What changes would you suggest overall? Couple suggestions, find more information to support each paragraph, use the full name World war I when it first exists on your page, to write an academic paragraph.
What is the most essential thing that the author could do to improve his/her contribution? The references should take from a different article because the historical events need to be combined with a large amount of literature.
Did you glean anything from your classmate's work that could apply to your own? If so, let him/her know! There should be an intro page before the contents and all the other information.
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