User talk:Ally kaplan/sandbox

Feedback on Outline

• I don't think "Organizations" is a good subheading. More logical here would be something chronological, such as "Pre-War Activities."
• It's hard for me to tell which parts are going to be your new additions vs. what is already on the page.
• Rather than using the review of Sam Kassow's work as a source, you should use Kassow's own books: Search UW Library for Books by Sam Kassow

Prof. Bitzan (talk) 20:59, 21 November 2016 (UTC)