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Welcome![edit]

Hello, AlyssaPC, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:41, 16 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]


Notes[edit]

Hi! I wanted to leave you some notes on your draft:

  • This could use more sources to back up claims. Keep in mind that sourcing does not have to be in English.
  • Some of the writing comes across as original research, that is, content you came up with that was not in the source material. I would recommend that you attribute claims to the person making them, as this can help deal with these concerns. Essentially, you want to make sure that nothing comes across as your own opinion.

Other than that, you have a good start here - it just needs some additional tweaking. I also wanted to give you a link to a brochure about creating book articles, which could be helpful in further refining the article. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:58, 16 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]