User talk:AmberedTime
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Hello!
My name is Rita and Cynthia Scott is one of the articles that i'm reviewing. To be honest, there is nothing missing in your article, you really did a great job! I thought maybe adding a bit more information about Scott's background, but I searched and there wasn't anything extra to be found. Finally, I just did a couple of spelling corrections in your article, but I did not change or add words.
Keep up the good work :)
Rita — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ritanour (talk • contribs) 01:36, 16 March 2016 (UTC)
Hello,
Your article on Cynthia Scott is very complete and well-written, so it does not need much editing! Here are some of my proposed changes:
"Her work with the NFB is in a mainly documentary vein, with many featuring dance including Flamenco at 5:15 (1983), which won an Academy Award for Documentary Short at the 56th Academy Awards in 1984." - This sentence is a bit awkward and could possibly be split into two sentences. Maybe it could be something like: "Her work with the NFB is mainly focused on documentary filmmaking. Her film Flamenco at 5:15 (1983), which won the Academy Award for Best Documentary Short Subject, is an example of the many documentaries she directed at the NFB that featured dance."
In the Background section, the edits I would make would be to replace the semi-colon after Manitoba with a period, and change the "which" after the word family to a "that".
"In 1965, Scott returned to Canada and began working as a public affairs producer for the Canadian Broadcasting Corporation television program Take 30 for nearly a decade." - I would change this to either:
"In 1965, Scott returned to Canada and began working as a public affairs producer for the Canadian Broadcasting Corporation television program Take 30, where she stayed for nearly a decade." or "In 1965, Scott returned to Canada where she worked as a public affairs producer for the Canadian Broadcasting Corporation television program Take 30 for nearly a decade."
"In Scott's first year with the NFB, she directed a 26 minute documentary named The Ungrateful Land: Roch Carrier Remembers Ste-Justine (1972), and would go on to win a Canadian Film Award (which would later become the Genie Awards in 1980 and then the Canadian Screen Awards in 2012) for direction in a TV Information program." This sentence is a bit of a run-on and could be split into 2 or 3 shorter sentences.
That's all. Great work!