User talk:Amelie Pak/Seljuk pottery

Sandbox Peer Review

1. I think your draft could benefit from a brief historical overview that could provide additional context.Elaborating on the socio-political climate during the Seljuk period could potentially support additional understanding of the overall artistic landscape.
2. I think that providing more detailed descriptions of planned sections, like "Themes, Motifs, and Style," would help to give readers better insight into the topic.
3. Brief summaries or explanations of the main topics of each source would definitely assist readers in determining usefulness and contributions. Some of the sources where the direct connection may be more ambiguous could benefit more from this kind of additional labeling.

Tmctazkiya (talk) 07:54, 22 February 2024 (UTC)