User talk:Amyabsa/sandbox

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@Amyabsa: Good start on the article but I think there's some work to be done to help satisfy WP:ORG. You've included two references and only one to a third-party source. Although that article talks about the organization in some depth, my reading of WP:ORG is that the article probably has not yet established notability. The tone seems pretty solid for an encyclopedia article. I also made some small changes to fix some minor things in the article. Take a look through the histories at the changes that I made. Good luck and keep it up! —mako๛ 19:26, 23 October 2015 (UTC)