User talk:AnonymousPanda1109

This user is a student editor in Soka_University_of_America/WRIT101-02_(Fall_2019) .

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:09, 4 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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I think your article is very concise, which focuses on three points: climatic variability, poor distribution of water, and prioritization of economic development as concerns of the water crisis in Iran. Also, the background information about Iran helps get a big picture of this issue. Because the article focuses on a specific country, it might be better if you put the History section, including the relationships with other countries and domestic conflicts.Risalmon (talk) 20:10, 19 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]