User talk:Antieed

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Hello, Antieed, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:49, 11 September 2019 (UTC)

Notes

Hi! I have some notes for you on Feminist Manifesto:

• There are some point of view/subjective statements in the article. These should be avoided on Wikipedia unless they're attributed to the person making the claim along the lines of "This Person stated that...". The reason for this is that subjective statements won't be true for all readers - one may agree while the other will completely disagree with the statement. For example, this line is subjective:

The tone of the first line is bold and inviting.

Someone could argue that it's neither of those things, using whatever argument they had in their heads. Now if it was attributed to a specific person then that would be different since even if they believed otherwise, they couldn't argue against the fact that this is something that the specific person stated and believes.

• You also want to avoid original research - we can only summarize content. We can't create connections or make conclusions that aren't explicitly stated in the source used. So for example, we can't say that Don't Be Quiet, start a Riot! was inspired by the Feminist Manifesto unless it's explicitly stated by Rosenberg or there's a reliable source that makes this connection, as Loy is probably not the first person to discuss the human voice and its importance to feminism.

• This needs more independent, reliable sources that discuss the work in question - looking at the sourcing, it looks like much of it is either primary (written by Loy or people/organizations affiliated with her) or doesn't mention the Feminist Manifesto. While you can use these sources to back up certain claims, they cannot establish notability for the work itself, which is necessary for the article. We need to be able to show where the work is independently notable outside of the author.

I hope this all helps! Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:19, 11 October 2019 (UTC)

Ways to improve Feminist Manifesto

Hello, Antieed,

Thank you for creating Feminist Manifesto.

I have tagged the page as having some issues to fix, as a part of our page curation process and note that:

Doesn't mention the following:Eugenicist. https://www.jstor.org/stable/30029772?seq=1

The tags can be removed by you or another editor once the issues they mention are addressed. If you have questions, leave a comment here and prepend it with {{Re|Scope creep}}. And, don't forget to sign your reply with ~~~~. For broader editing help, please visit the Teahouse.

Delivered via the Page Curation tool, on behalf of the reviewer.

scope_creep^Talk 11:43, 22 December 2019 (UTC)