User talk:AustenCis
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:53, 15 March 2018 (UTC)
AustenCis Peer Review[edit]
In the beginning of your article, you should probably clarify what you're talking about. "This type of migration is called forced migration" what type of migration? I also see a a few grammatical mistakes, I believe it should be advanced not advance. Also, some of your language is not very encyclopedic; some of the statements you make look like personal value judgments, such as "now it's easier than ever". You should also clarify if you plan to make this a new section or add to an existing section. Other than that, I do like the ideas that you want to add, like the socioeconomic causes of migration. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jpayan1488 (talk • contribs) 00:11, 1 April 2018 (UTC)