User talk:B Lonergan SA

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Hello. On behalf of a business Client, I would like to: A) Move / rename a page (to reflect the correct name of the business). The page in question is "GE Measurement & Control Solutions". B) Edit the majority of that page entry content for accuracy and completeness (to reflect several changes in the business since this original article was posted)

In June 2015 I created a Wikipedia account for the purpose of making these changes. I realize my account access does not allow me to rename the page, but why is the new content not appearing?

Any help would be appreciated.

Thanks! Brinana

B Lonergan SA (talk) 13:51, 13 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

B Lonergan SA, your recent additions were reverted because they were very promotional, containing WEASEL words and FLOWERY language. Since you are working for the company, I suggest (a) putting a note such as {{paid}} on your userpage and/or the talk page of the company in question, and (b) make proposed changes on the talk page first, and then proceed once someone else makes sure it's not unduly promotional. If you want more help, stop by the Teahouse, Wikipedia's live help channel, or the help desk to ask someone for assistance. Primefac (talk) 16:19, 13 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]