User talk:Banga96792
Eng 22 Class Page
[edit]See the Eng 22 class page here: User:Eng22
Welcome
[edit]Welcome!
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Cheers. Trance addict - Armin van Buuren - Oceanlab 23:17, 8 July 2008 (UTC)
1st draft comments
[edit]- I removed the headline from the first section. For wikipedia, the first section (intro) has no heading. See Wikipedia:Lead_section for details.
- For the second section, remove the beginning quote ("Mom, why..."). You need to write the article like an encyclopedia entry. For quidelines, see this link on Wikipedia:Good article criteria.
==Mr Turner --Eng22 (talk) 19:07, 10 July 2008 (UTC)