User talk:Brendazambon

Welcome![edit]

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PS: The project page can be found at: Wikipedia:Benelux Education Program/Maastricht University/FPN Historical Book Review Spring 2017. Romaine (talk) 14:19, 26 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Feedback on your article[edit]

Hello Brendazambon, Thank you for writing your article in your sandbox! I have read the article and would like to give some feedback to improve your article to Wikipedia standards and customs. I especially will look if it meets the quality standards we have on Wikipedia. I standard look for a series of subjects that need improvement or are okay.

Intro sentence: the information is there, the order in what it is presented needs improvement.
Links: Missing!
Headers: Please create headers as shown on cheatsheet, not by making them bold.
References: Good start, but we need more.
Context/timeframe: Missing
How was the book received: Missing
Other: The description of the chapters is presented too much like a book report. The article is supposed to be an article in an encyclopedia that describes the book.

I hope you can implement this feedback to your sandbox article before our next meeting. Thanks! Romaine (talk) 10:19, 10 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Hello Brendazambon, Thank you for improving your article! Last week we specifically asked to make sure you add sources/references to your article, because that is one of the most important parts of a Wikipedia article. We also wanted to make sure the intro sentence/section is ready. Let's see how it is going now.

Intro sentence: With last session I showed examples and gave instructions how to create the first sentence with translation. I do not understand why you missed that, this should have been ready by now, so I changed it for you. Now it is okay.
Links: Thank you for adding links. Much better! You may find some more keywords.
Headers: Please change "The book received" to "Reception". Please make the text in bold in the section "Contents" as headers '''...''' -> === ... ===
References: Thank you for adding more sources. The number of different sources is sufficient for now, but we need more references. Both in the sections "Reviewed" and "Timeframe" I need more references. You may use a reference more than once. Please add if possible also references in the section "Contents" to where certain parts come from in the book, like the chapter or page.
Context/timeframe: great!
How was the book received: Great that you started with this section, but we do like to read more. What does the reviewer say (more) about the book?
Other: The text under the section "Contents" has improved well!

Please work on the references and the reception, two main focus points. Romaine (talk) 02:32, 17 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Hello Brendazambon, I add the images of the book to your sandbox article. Romaine (talk) 05:47, 23 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]