User talk:Brittanysuchy/sandbox

Re: Proposed edits - Good, you've hit most of the major points. — Preceding unsigned comment added by S.C. Kaplan (talk • contribs) 16:53, 22 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

First: Any time you're including an online source, such as a website or online encyclopedia article, you MUST include a URL. Second: Both of your chapter references are incorrect. You give the book title but not the chapter title, which is also necessary.