User talk:CBothSides
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:09, 4 November 2019 (UTC)
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I think your article presented a simple and concise title. The first sentence of the article clearly defines the subject with the correct format: "the safe, beneficial use of animal or human excreta, i.e. faeces (or feces in American English) and urine". The article has sufficient sections and sub-sections to address its topic and are presented in a sensible order, and the writing style is pretty easy to get into as a general audience without any expertise. The writing style also doesn't seem opinionated, as both the plus and minus of excreta reusing is presented. What you might do in the article is to find more and cite more for uncited places within the article, such as this one in the lead: "However, excreta can cause health risks and environmental problems because of pathogens, pharmaceutical residues, and nitrate pollution." That aside, the article has a very good lead section, with all parts of the article mentioned equally and no redundancy. I think I can learn a lot from this lead section to apply to mine. Yellow Flannel (talk) 06:22, 20 November 2019 (UTC)