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Pre-Edit Peer Review Feedback

Name of student reviewer: Wikipedia User: Cgchapman

    • Replace with username for version on talk page**


Date of review: 05/04/2013


Name of editor: Wikipedia User: CRamel16

    • Replace with username for version on talk page**


URL of editor’s Userpage: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:CRamel16/Personal_sandbox


Date review posted on editor’s sandbox’s talk page: 05/04/2013


Date review submitted to instructor:


Length of edit (too long/too short): Good length


Image (needed/appropriate): Not needed


Review of textbook information (accuracy of info in edit): Edit is accurate to the information in the textbook.


Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed: N/A


Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych): Information accurate and relevant to I/O Psychology


Wikiformatting: Good wikiformatting


Grammar & composition: Good grammer and composition


Other comments: None


Cgchapman (talk) 12:06, 4 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]









Pre-Edit Peer Review Feedback

Name of student reviewer: Christina GeoHaghan Christina geo

Date of review: 5/3/13

Name of editor: Ramnel Cortorreal-Rosario CRamel16

URL of editor’s Userpage: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:CRamel16/Personal_sandbox

Date review posted on editor’s sandbox’s talk page: 4/30/13

Date review submitted to instructor: 4/30/13

Length of edit (too long/too short): 3 sentences

Image (needed/appropriate): Not needed

Review of textbook information (accuracy of info in edit): Yes

Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed: Yes

Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych): Yes

Wikiformatting: bullets and numerical, list form

Grammar & composition: Perfect grammar and composition

Other comments: PERFECT!!


--Christina geo (talk) 20:14, 3 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]


Name of student reviewer * Wikipedia User:M.Caban
Date of review 5/1/2013
Name of editor**Replace with username for version on talk page** Wikipedia User: CRamel16
URL of editor’s Userpage http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:CRamel16/Personal_sandbox
Date review posted on editor’s sandbox’s talk page 5/1/2013
Date review submitted to instructor 5/1/2013
Length of edit (too long/too short) Good length
Image (needed/appropriate) Image not needed.
Review of textbook information (accuracy of info in edit) The information provided was accurate from the text book
Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed N/A
Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych) The article information was relevant to I/O Psych topic and added information was accurate from the text.
Wikiformatting Good on bullets, numbered, and link.
Grammar & composition None found
Other comments very good job



Pre-Edit Peer Review Feedback

Name of student reviewer * Wikipedia User:VIMMYSEAJATAN
Date of review 5/1/2013
Name of editor**Replace with username for version on talk page** Wikipedia User: CRamel16
URL of editor’s Userpage http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:CRamel16/Personal_sandbox
Date review posted on editor’s sandbox’s talk page 5/1/2013
Date review submitted to instructor 5/1/2013
Length of edit (too long/too short) length is okay
Image (needed/appropriate) Image not needed.
Review of textbook information (accuracy of info in edit) The information provided was accurate from the text book
Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed N/A
Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych) The article information was relevant to I/O Psych topic and added information was accurate from the text.
Wikiformatting bullets, numbered, and link are okay
Grammar & composition None found
Other comments Great job!
Name of student reviewer **Replace with username for version on talk page** Wikipedia User:Fernando18
Date of review 5/1/2013
Name of editor**Replace with username for version on talk page** Wikpedia User: CRanel16
URL of editor’s Userpage http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:CRamel16/Personal_sandbox
Date review posted on editor’s sandbox’s talk page 5/1/13
Date review submitted to instructor 5/1/13
Length of edit (too long/too short) Good length
Image (needed/appropriate) need a image if possible
Review of textbook information (accuracy of info in edit) Very accurate
Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed Primary
Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych) Accurate
Wikiformatting Good Bullet pints
Grammar & composition None
Other comments Good


Name of student reviewer: Jasmine R Basnight

Date of review: 05/06/13


Name of editor: Ramnel Cortorreal-Rosario

URL of editor’s Userpage: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:CRamel16/Personal_sandbox

Date review posted on editor’s sandbox’s talk page: 4/30/13

Date review submitted to instructor: 4/30/13

Length of edit (too long/too short): The edit was 3 sentences

Image (needed/appropriate): N/A

Review of textbook information (accuracy of info in edit): Yes

Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed: Yes

Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych): Yes

Wikiformatting: bullets and numerical, list form

Grammar & composition: Good grammar and composition

Other comments: None — Preceding unsigned comment added by MsPsychology (talkcontribs) 02:08, 7 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]