User talk:Chang.sar/Gait Training Sandbox

Ashley Choi Peer Review

Hi, Sarah! I thought your article/section was great overall and I learned more about gait training. The article is easy to follow and reader-friendly; it's definitely a large improvement from the previous article that had been posted on it. I really like that you list out a bunch of conditions for which gait training can be useful with hyperlinks attached-- great choice there. Your additions include nice and concise, clear information that'll be great on the main space! I don't think there's any major alterations to make to your article, but here are a few minute suggestions: 1. Add photos of the stance/swing phases because they're a bit difficult to describe 2. Hyperlink the Assistive Devices list like you did the conditions for which gait training can be useful list 3. Don't forget 4-point gait training Overall, a great article! Enjoyed learning more about gait training :) - Ashley Choi Choi.a (talk)

Ellison Kim Peer Review

Hi Sarah, I enjoyed reading your contribution to this article mostly because you gave very clear information and made the layout very easy to navigate. Compared to the original article, your organization made the article much more presentable and professional. I like the way that you split sections so that the reader doesn't miss important steps to gait training. Overall, the only thing that I would suggest is adding hyperlinks to certain words that readers wouldn't commonly know and citing more than one source in each paragraph. I think it would make your article more credible if the reader can see that you made each claim through several different sources. From your sections, it encouraged me to go back to my article and organize it more clearly so that the reader can navigate specific information quicker. This was a really, really well done contribution, and I enjoyed your topic choice. -Ellison Kim Ellisonkim99 (talk) 00:16, 28 February 2019 (UTC)