User talk:Chesschamp82/sandbox/Accruva Formation
Like most of our classmates your wikipage is relatively short. The introduction section could use more work. You could include some figures for your page to help illustrate the topic. The location section could be added to the intro paragraph since it is only one sentence long.drau1 (talk) 1:48, 7 March 2014(UTC)
Comments from Graeme[edit]
Where are every one else's comments?
any way why is this abbreviated "psh"? Is the "shield plains" term a name for the place, or is it the type of terrain? You mention it is one of 14 and also say there is another 14 (total=15) so which is it? "Equidimensional patches" of what? What do mean by "This is the first unit", is that in some kind of sequence, or a time order of discovery? What does "dual stratigraphic classification system" have to do with stratigraphy or why is it called dual? To fix that url=scheme consider the use of http://! Graeme Bartlett (talk) 03:10, 15 March 2014 (UTC)