User talk:ChristianLugar/sandbox
Excellent work, all of the rubric requirements were met. There is a section in the first paragraph where some words should be edited out to give the sentence a better flow. The only other section that I would hope to look for in the future of your article is if there are any remedies that ease the symptoms of the afflicted individuals.
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