User talk:Cjchan2016/sandbox

HMB436 Peer Comments

Hi there,

You have a lot of good information on your species so far! I really liked how you included the biocontrol and industrial importance sections for your fungus, I found these very interesting! I know your article is still in progress, and changing the section headings to just "Growth and Morphology," "Pathogenicity," etc. would help make everything look more organized. You mentioned that your species has some antioxidant and antibacterial properties, do you have anymore information on this? And also, do you have any more information on the kinds of symptoms that occur when this fungus causes disease in humans? Additionally, you might be interested in adding some in-text links to other Wikipedia articles to further explain some of the terms you mention in your article. For example, adding an in-text link for Basidiomycota, teliospore, and terms like that would make it easy for readers who are interested in the topic to easily find more information. Great work so far!

Cdrazyk (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 17:27, 30 October 2015 (UTC)

Hey, this is Emilia form HMB 436! It looks like you're still working on organizing your information, but you have some neat facts! I noticed you have that line of reference numbers below your reference heading. I had that too and it was so annoying. I fixed it by formatting my references this way (it won't show up here, so you'll have to go into edit source to see:

Hey Cjchan2016, it looks like you got some good material and flow started in your sandbox, and simply require some touch-ups on Wikipedia algorithms to remove any excess notations. For example in your reference list, there’s an excess numerical links that don’t pertain to any relevant information but are connected to your sources. To eliminate that, remember to put the ending wiki-markup notations  If possible, perhaps include some simple explanations of certain mechanisms in how your fungi expresses its pathogenicity, prevent moldiness in harvests, or even examples of defensive properties. This would help provide a bit more depth in support of the facts, as you have good breadth on the topic of your fungi. Don’t forget to put subheadings when the time comes! Goodluck on writing! Dorochoi (talk) 02:18, 31 October 2015 (UTC)

References

That fixed the numbers for me. Good luck! CrabbyMil (talk) 19:38, 30 October 2015 (UTC)