User talk:Clara-a97/sandbox
Feedback from Bori
[edit]Hi Clara, I really liked that you added the effects on local communities and cited your sources well. I corrected some grammar errors and simplified some sentences, but otherwise I think it looks good! One question that I had was how come you have two citations after one sentence? (For 6 and 7.) Did you read the information in both sources?
Response to Feedback from Bori
[edit]Thank you very much for your feedback Bori! Yes I did. The one I initially planned to talk about is reference 7, but the original wikipedia article I am working one quoted 6. I tried to stick to the way the wikipedia article was structured and therefore to keep this reference as well. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Clara-a97 (talk • contribs) 20:00, 29 November 2017 (UTC)