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Peer review by Ryan Luong

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Lead section: Perhaps you could include the title "1960s fasshion", but I reckon it would already be included in the main article anyway

Has a clear structure: The discussion of miniskirts and go-go boots are relevant to 1960s fashion by discussing the clothing's origin with a brief history of its significance like the go-go boots representing women's power.

Balanced coverage: A fair balance between talking about the clothing's historical trend and its importance in the 1960s; all in a succinct matter. I can find no other way to improve it.

Neutral content: Excellent neutrality

Reliable sources: I trust that the books you mentioned in your references are reliable sources to learn more about 1960s fashion