User talk:Coll.casey21

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Hello, Coll.casey21, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:38, 5 September 2018 (UTC)

Speedy deletion nomination of Nancy Faber

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A tag has been placed on Nancy Faber, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, group, product, service, person, or point of view and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and Wikipedia:FAQ/Organizations for more information.

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November 2018

Hello, Coll.casey21. Thank you for helping to build Wikipedia-- the world's largest free content encyclopedia. I'm sorry, but  Nancy Faber has been deleted as meeting WP:CSD#G11. "This applies to pages that are exclusively promotional and would need to be fundamentally rewritten to conform with Wikipedia:NOTFORPROMOTION." These must be rewritten from scratch from "reliable, third party sources unconnected to the subject." See WP:RS.

Wikipedia:Identifying blatant advertising#Typical signs of blatant advertising contains information about content to avoid. For more information on content that may be perceived as promotional, click User:Dlohcierekim/promo. These are just rough guides. Pages can avoid all those pitfalls and still be glaringly obvious ad copy. Sometimes pages meeting WP:CSD#G11 give the appearance of an editor violating Wikipedia:Conflict of interest or WP:PAID. Please read and heed them if they apply to you. Please read Wikipedia:FAQ/Organizations.

Wikipedia is an encyclopedia-- subjects must meet notability guidelines with reliable sources that are unconnected with the subject and providing verifiable information. That generally means someone unconnected with the subject needs to have written a great deal about the subject. Please see Wikipedia:Citing sources . Template:cite has templates you can use in citing your sources. Place the template {{references}} at the bottom of the page, and references cited in the text will appear there.

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You may find this tool useful: Google custom search Don't feel discouraged. My first attempts at creating articles were deleted too.

There is more information at Wikipedia:Community portal. There is help available at THE TEAHOUSE. Cheers, and happy editing. -- Dlohcierekim (talk) 17:24, 13 November 2018 (UTC)

moved page to

Draft:Nancy Faber. When you describe a subject as you did it crosses over to promotionalism. Especially when all the sourcing is connected with the subject. Not sure what your teaching was thinking. Ok, no idea. Wikipedia is an encyclopedia. All content must be cited from reliable sources that are unconnected with the subject and have a reputation for fact checking. The only reason I restored is I saw the Wikiedu edit summary and realized the intent was probably not promotional.-- Dlohcierekim (talk) 17:31, 13 November 2018 (UTC)

@Ryan (Wiki Ed): another of your lambs is tangled in the briers.-- Dlohcierekim (talk) 17:33, 13 November 2018 (UTC) @Praxidicae: heh-- Dlohcierekim (talk) 17:35, 13 November 2018 (UTC)

Thanks for the ping. Relaying that ping to Shalor (Wiki Ed) (here and off-wiki), who is the Wikipedia Expert working with the class. :) --Ryan (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:54, 13 November 2018 (UTC)

• Thanks for the ping! Coll.casey21, I agree that the article is very promotional. Here are some notes:

1. Phrases and words like "the leading" or "highly respected" are seen as promotional buzzwords, as they're often used to promote the person or topic at hand. They're also highly subjective to the reader. One may agree with them, while another would strongly disagree. Avoid using them in articles unless you're using and attributing a quote from a reliable source.
2. Use quotes sparingly and only when you cannot re-write it in your own words. Sometimes they can be useful but in situations like this they can also make an article seem more promotional.
3. This needs more non-primary sources to establish notability. Also, read primary sources with a grain of salt, as they are going to talk about Faber in a very positive light. I am not saying that they would outright lie, but it is common for people to "puff up" claims to seem more major than they otherwise are.

Let me know if you have any questions! Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:28, 13 November 2018 (UTC)

Response

Hi! I saw that you posted to my talk page, but didn't specify your question. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:45, 14 November 2018 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Nancy Faber

Hello, Coll.casey21. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Nancy Faber".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply and remove the {{db-afc}}, {{db-draft}}, or {{db-g13}} code.

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. CASSIOPEIA^(talk) 05:42, 11 June 2019 (UTC)