User talk:Cox Marguerite/sandbox
Peer Review Comments
[edit]I really like that for each country, you listed a recent policy describing the state of the sex work decriminalization and then discussed the effects of that legislation on sex workers. Possibly it could be of interest to describe the policies of each country and then include a section discussing the effects? Not sure if it would work better or not.
I think the most important thing you could do to improve the article is to add more examples of how these laws end up affecting sex workers. Gvacaliuc (talk) 18:50, 5 March 2019 (UTC)