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[edit]@Ctray0320: Nice start on your draft. A few important things you need to do moving forward
- You currently lack adequate inline sources. Everything in the article should be supported by an inline reference. The reference needs to be placed after the statement it supports, and needs to be in the same paragraph as the statement. One reference at the end of a paragraph is OK if it supports everything in the paragraph, but you can't have content after the final reference, because there's no way for readers to know which source it's supported by.
- You should also use the cite tool to produce properly-formatted references. See this training slide for a reminder on how to do this.
- Your lead section should summarize all the major points of the article. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 13:55, 19 April 2019 (UTC)