User talk:Cushman.s
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Nice work on the Cell encapsulation article. A few things going forward.
- References should appear immediately after the statements they support. There should be a minimum of one reference per paragraph, and there shouldn’t be any text after the last reference in a paragraph. In several cases you added text after the final reference in a paragraph. It's impossible for your readers to know where that comes from.
- When writing about techniques, you should explain them for general readers, not for people who might want to carry out the procedures. Bear in mind that your audience in the general public. In most cases paragraphs are better than bullet points - they're generally more readable.
- Don't include references or links in section headers, like you did with the "Electrospray techniques" section. A reference in the header is impossible to connect directly to the text in the section (especially if someone expands the section later). Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:32, 27 June 2017 (UTC)