User talk:DQuennell/sandbox
The 3 questions I picked to evaluate about the article of Jordin Tootoo are:
1. Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? Yes. I believe large aspects of Jordin's personal life are underrepresented in this article. There is very little mention of his late brother, which was an extremely important aspect towards shaping his life. As well as almost no mention of the book he wrote while going through a recovery faze after his rehab stint. Another point that i saw no mention of at all is the Team Tootoo foundation that he started as a non-profit.
2. Is everything in the article relevant to the article topic? Everything in the article is relevant to the life of Jordin. It doesnt go into great detail of his life but everything that is there is relevant from his hockey career, his presence as a Inuk native and his hard times he has faced.
3. Is there any information missing or is there any information that is outdated? The statistics they have for Jordin's NHL career are outdated in this article. The Team Tootoo foundation has no mention in this article as well as an abundance of missing information in regards to his book and how he battled back and is serving as a role model for his home community and others just like it.
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