User talk:DSysteel/sandbox
PeerReview[edit]
So far it looks like you have made some good progress compared to the original article. You included your new sources, added a table of content, and I can see where you added new content/topics. Of course I know that you are still working on this, so when I saw the questions under the History/Content section I can tell that is where you are planning to add more information. I liked seeing how you have a plan to split up the original Visual Description section, which was one of the major issues I could find in the article. Also good catch on checking the original sources which are faulty. I'm looking forward to seeing more information you provide based off of your own resources/research (I'm curious if you plan on getting more resources too?) Heathers09 (talk) 02:32, 4 April 2019 (UTC)