User talk:Dcneel3

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Leadership in Entrepreneurship

Hi,
You've added quite a lot of text to the article, which is really good, but could I suggest some improvements?

It's quite dependent on a single source, cited Harvard-style (Hackman & Johnson, 2009). Now, you could add "Hackman, M. Z., & Johnson, C. E. (2009). Leadership: A communication perspective (5th ed.)" to the References section (if that's really the one you're citing), but wikipedia also allows clickable inline citations which are a bit more convenient for readers. Would you consider using those? And would you consider citing some other sources? There are already some good examples in the other part of the article.
It can be helpful to break text up into paragraphs and sections, like this.

Have fun; bobrayner (talk) 14:16, 15 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]