User talk:Dena.wolfs/Body doubling

Review[edit]

Good start! View your page's history to see my edits and templates. My biggest concern is the sparsity of sources, which might indicate a lack of notability. Once you have addressed my templated concerns, you can proceed to mainspace, but if you do not find more sources I think you probably will receive pushback on the topic of notability. Perhaps User:LibrarianBTeam would have suggestions? -Reagle (talk) 18:20, 21 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Dena! This is a very interesting topic. In your first paragraph I don’t think you need the sentence that begins with “This is where ADHD body doubling comes into play…” as your next sentence gets your point across.

In your applications section, the examples are very helpful as it helped me visualize what body doubling could look like in both a professional and academic setting. In the criticisms section it might be worth it to discuss personality types/situations where body doubling would not be effective (not sure if there is research on that though). Good job! Lvogel1 (talk) 15:42, 24 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]